Holly Sprite
Posts : 5 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 29 Location : Scotland Hobbies : reading, gaming and writing <3
| Subject: Just started this :) Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:15 pm | |
| Hope you like it.. although it isnt very good ill write more later <3 "Breathe," they said, "just breathe..." As though it was that easy. Have you ever been in so much pain that you think you aren't going to live through it? That's what giving birth felt like to me. At a later date I would realise that I was actually supposed to die on that day, that it had been my 'destiny', as they put it to me... However, I don't like to linger on the bad, even if ever since I gave birth and denied fate that day, I have been in a tornado filled with dark clouds and whistling winds. I'm serious, that's what they sent in New York. It feels like a lifetime away, both light and dark struggling to get to us first, to control what they call 'The Key' and what I call my daughter. The first hint that there was something different about my daughter, Alara, was when I went into labour two months early. Surprisingly, my daughter was perfect - the perfect size and shape and not a hair wrong, she was not what the doctors were expecting at all. They wanted to run tests, but I knew what that meant, endless experimenting, and I wasn't about to put my daughter through that. I declined their ridiculous amounts of money and left, taking my baby with me.
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MissYuna Goddess
Posts : 216 Join date : 2010-03-07 Age : 45 Location : Somewhere in the dark eating your cookies Hobbies : Online gaming and GFX
| Subject: Re: Just started this :) Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:20 pm | |
| Amazing start i cant wait to read more,,,,,,, Awesome job | |
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Rangar95 Game Mod Demonic
Posts : 39 Join date : 2010-04-07 Age : 29 Location : USA Hobbies : Gaming/Photography/UGT(a youtube series with me and my bro)
| Subject: Re: Just started this :) Thu Jul 15, 2010 12:11 am | |
| luv it holly, keep it coming, i would luv to read more | |
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